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14
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Rochester, Michigan, USA, North America, Earth, Milky Way Galaxy
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Jokeman248@gmail.com
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This is the preview of two RPG fan-games I'm working on. I'm posting a preview because for one thing its taking me a long time to make them and also I could use some feedback before I go any further. They are Mario and Metal Slug. I called the Metal Slug one Roboman though.
Roboman - first off BE SURE TO READ THE INSTRUCTIONS BEFORE PLAYING!!! This preview includes the first two levels of the first mission. It's not as many levels as the Mario one because I started this one a little later. here's the story: You are a retired soldier with great mechanic inteligence and now your being called back into the army to face a new unknown enemy by controlling a highly powerfull robot. It's now really a fangame considering I've never even played metal slug, but i just liked the graphics. I'm probably gonna have a load game option I just havn't got to making one yet.
Mario: not really much to explain. It's Mario. I got different worlds and everything. I just didn't put in the map because it kept on getting glitchy and all this stuff and decided it was too much work just so you could see a little icon move around. This preview includes the FIRST three levels of the first world (meaning in the actual game that world will be longer), the first boss, and the FIRST three levels of the second world. here's the story: at the begining of the game mario and luigi have just beaten bowser and are rewarded with a gold mushroomj. But then, the mushroom and Luigi are kidnapped. Mario automatically blames bowser and goes after him but bowser isn't the only bad guy out there... There are no checkpoints cause the lvls are pretty short and there are no lives you just keep restarting the level if you die. The game saves at the end of every lvl.
The things I'd like feed back on for both are if they are too hard/too easy, if they are fun, if the story is believable, if you find any glitches, and any other compliments/complaints you can think of!!!
Comments
Problems! Metal Slug: How am I supposed to beat level two? Mario: You really need to polish this up. The levels could be a little longer.
Overall: Nice job, I can tell you put a lot of work in this, the Mario game needs some polishing but its pretty good.
I was debating the lvl 2 on metal slug too. I'll change and update later. for mario I meant the lvls to be longer, theres gonna be a lot more lvls per world when its done. the end of each lvl is more like a checkpoint what else needs polishing for mario other than that
Awesome game but metal slug glitch: the weapons don't work in LVL 2 and the finish doesn't do anything
well idk why the weapons aren't working I'll check that out but the reason the finish doesnt work is because it isnt activated untill all the enemies (that aren't invincible) are killed
EDIT: wait, Mario Jr, is that why u were saying lvl 2 is impossable??
EDIT: just fixed the glitch with roboman should work fine now please report any other glitches
Hey who thinks I should add a skip button on the Mario game so you can skip a level if you can't get it and who thinks there should be a limit on the amount of times you can use it and if so what should the limit be? should I do that for roboman too?
You shouldn't do that but there should be a lives system on mario and a way to skip the opening cutscene.
Ya I didnt put a skip cus its just a preview and i didnt put lives cus It would just the game less fun when ur playing a computer game and run out of lives and have to start over know one keeps playing, they just switch to a new game. no lives = more addicting
BTW a main reason I posted the previews is because I started them because i couldn't think of any ideas for an original game and now I thought of one so these games might not be finished for a while